Can you help me make this letter more professional?"?

Dear Mr. Haryana,


My boss saw a number of items in your Jaipur showroom recently that she would like to order for our shop. She is particularly interested in ordering 50 of the yellow and green 12" vases that you retail for 1,000 rupees. What is the wholesale cost to us? She would also like to order 50 of the 6" turquoise candlestick holders which retail for 759 rupees. Please also include in our shipment 25 of the brown monkey tiles and 25 of the blue elephant tiles. Finally, my boss would like you to send 50 of the 5" yellow-flower soap dishes that retail for 300 rupees.





We are interested in having these items charged to our credit card. The more quickly you turn this order around the better, as our busiest season of the year strats in a month.





Sincerely,





Bobbi Smith





I am a owner of 'Swank', which is a home decor shop in Toronto.





I have to this letter to,


Mr. Ajit Haryana


President


Blue Pottery Industries


Friends Colony


303904


Jaipur, India

Can you help me make this letter more professional?"?
Dear Mr. Haryana


My name is Bobbi Smith and I am the owner of "Swank" a home decor shop in Toronto.





We are considering the purchase of a number of items from your Jaipur showroom and require additional information before proceeding. The specifics include a wholesale price quote, availability, shipping time, and payment options for the following:





50 yellow and green 12" vases (retail price1,000 rupees)


50 turquoise 6" candlestick holders (retail price 759 rupees)


50 yellow-flower 5" soap dishes (retail price 300 rupees)


25 brown monkey tiles


25 blue elephant tiles





We need deliver of the items within thirty days and our preferred payment method is major credit card.





We look forward to your timely response and the opportunity of doing business with you.





Sincerely





Bobbi Smith


Swank